Drew a pin-up girl last night & edited thru PShop; it seems off to me (the hair) but would anyone like to give tips/critiques on the comp overall? (OG pencil-works in comments)

Drew a pin-up girl last night & edited thru PShop; it seems off to me (the hair) but would anyone like to give tips/critiques on the comp overall? (OG pencil-works in comments)

http://imgur.com/aoFhZP0

original: http://imgur.com/aoFhZP0

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No big plans, just getting married.

No big plans, just getting married.

lolgrindr

Biting down

Biting down

NSFW_Plowcam

Meagan Fox and Cuckold, Brian Austin Green

Meagan Fox and Cuckold, Brian Austin Green

Cuckold

Flicking her hair

Flicking her hair

NSFW_Plowcam

Pierced nipples

Pierced nipples

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Whats [f]or lunch? Boobs!

Whats [f]or lunch? Boobs!

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Brooke Show - dat ratio

Brooke Show - dat ratio

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All black

All black

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On her knees

On her knees

bondageheels

Strip tease (f)ROM yesterday

Strip tease (f)ROM yesterday

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jalexander225's uploaded images

jalexander225's uploaded images

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I see you...

I see you...

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See-through

See-through

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I'd like to go a couple rounds with her

I'd like to go a couple rounds with her

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In time out

In time out

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