Im trying to improve drawing from a reference. How can i improve this painting?

Im trying to improve drawing from a reference. How can i improve this painting?

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uhhhhh.... These are boobs. What ya think?

uhhhhh.... These are boobs. What ya think?

Boobies

Dat view!

Dat view!

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This is my favorite pose.

This is my favorite pose.

gonewildcurvy

I don't have anyone to play with anymore

I don't have anyone to play with anymore

ladybonersgw

Young teen. Kik.

Young teen. Kik.

penis

[F]igured you might like this

[F]igured you might like this

gonewild

I got my [f]irst thong!

I got my [f]irst thong!

gonewild

Boobie Girl

Boobie Girl

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one more bath pic [F]

one more bath pic [F]

gonewild

I've been (f)ingering myself so hard to your PMs - thanks!

I've been (f)ingering myself so hard to your PMs - thanks!

gonewild

First post

First post

mangonewild

Combo Shot

Combo Shot

ass

It would have been a monumental event

It would have been a monumental event

4chan

The amount o[f] love I have for Kingdom Hearts is hard to understand

The amount o[f] love I have for Kingdom Hearts is hard to understand

GWNerdy

a little(m)ore

a little(m)ore

ladybonersgw